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Where Did I Record This?This piece of audio was recorded while I was riding the "L" home from class. I was on the Red Line train that goes North towards Howard. The recording took place as the train was approaching the Lake Street stop.
What Audio Does This Recording Consist Of?
Within this recording there are several things that can be heard. We can hear the sound of the train on the track slowing down as it approaches the stop. Next is the sound of the voice coming over the loudspeaker inside the train; informing the riders that the stop is the Lake Street station. We also hear the sound of the doors opening and passengers boarding the train. As the train departs from the Lake Street stop, we hear voices of the people around me as they find seats and/or get themselves situated.
What Makes This "Chicago" To Me?
Being from the suburbs, the CTA rail system is something new and unique to me. The Chicago "L" is one of the numerous things that defines the metropolis from most others. The recording is extremely "busy" sounding, which is another thing that defines it as "Chicago" to me. The main thing that makes this recording sound like "Chicago" is all the people talking. Chicago is heavily populated and I think that this recording captures that ascpect of the city very well.
Glad that you finally were able to put this one in place. Although I understand that it is your first take, let me say:
ReplyDelete1) Make your (project and post) purpose more obvious. Consider using a "Page" to guide your reader to your Introduction, for instance. Also consider using a post introduction.
2) You need an angle. That is, you must make assertions other than this is "new and unique" to me.
3) Reconsider your tone. This sounds too matter-of-fact to gain an audience.
Okay. Three to begin with. More to follow in class and in upcoming posts.